New story

[benjamin03]

A man's last stand


Ok i sent in my / my mates FIRST story , that was made by my zombie-loving friend , it's very short , but i hope u like it ( when it get's accepted anyway ! i just sent it in now ).
U finish reading it in about 10 minutes :eek: but it stays in your mind.
It's also just a first work as to see the reaction of readers.
Uhm . . . i am not going to give the story away here , it's short enough already ! U are just going to have to read it ;)




Ben




P.S : I LOVE MY SUBSCRIPTION , THX ALOT HOMEPAGEOFTHEDEAD ! :)

[rightwing401]

Sound's promising. I've always held the opinion that a story only has to be as long as it needs to. Can't wait to read it.

[Adrenochrome]

I've always held the opinion that a story only has to be as long as it needs to. Can't wait to read it.
Yes.
Alot of amateur writers tend to go into too much detail which will inevitably bore the reader and sometimes cause the writer to get lost and confused when trying to make a simple point.
There are many great stories that can be found here; I look forward to reading yours.

peace

[benjamin03]

thx guys , good to hear

[benjamin03]

Ok ppl , the time has come, the gents at hoempageofthedead were nice enough to accept it , so pls all of u read it and don't forget too send a comment , good or bad ! :D

[Adrenochrome]

Not bad at all for a "quickie". Nice job.