Feeder

[livingdeadboy]

My new short flick, now on you tube. FEEDER

[Wahsleety]

I like this one. It's similar to a picture i've been working on for a while. Cool, thanks.

[livingdeadboy]

I like this one. It's similar to a picture i've been working on for a while. Cool, thanks. Glad you liked it

[Danny]

you know i just realised i watched the wrong damn film,hahaha!. having now watched the right one (the fact that it was the same actors from survivors finally gave away id been a prat and clicked on a wrong link), i liked it a lot, the writings improved a lot from survivors and the dudes acting was a little better too, nice one!

[axlish]

I think it was well shot, well scored (where'd you steal the music from? ), and well acted. I couldn't understand most of the "deep voice talk" though, and the convo in the bathroom ran a little long. Overall a good effort.

[livingdeadboy]

I think it was well shot, well scored (where'd you steal the music from? ), and well acted. I couldn't understand most of the "deep voice talk" though, and the convo in the bathroom ran a little long. Overall a good effort. Didn't steal the music from anywhere, made it myself. At one point in the movie I used a few pre-recorded loops from soundtrack.

[MinionZombie]

"If sh*t were a bag, it'd be you" - fantastic line. I think you can be very proud of that film, like what was said before though, the bathroom stuff could have done with a bit of a trim for pacing and the slow voice was at times hard to understand. However, the rest of the film was rather cool with some nice gore chucked in for good measure. I can see you've really improved since "Survivors" (which I also enjoyed and was also good) so you're definately heading in the right direction with your filmmaking. All in all a very nice short film, good stuff dude.

[livingdeadboy]

"If sh*t were a bag, it'd be you" - fantastic line. I think you can be very proud of that film, like what was said before though, the bathroom stuff could have done with a bit of a trim for pacing and the slow voice was at times hard to understand. However, the rest of the film was rather cool with some nice gore chucked in for good measure. I can see you've really improved since "Survivors" (which I also enjoyed and was also good) so you're definately heading in the right direction with your filmmaking. All in all a very nice short film, good stuff dude. Thanks man

[axlish]

Didn't steal the music from anywhere, made it myself. At one point in the movie I used a few pre-recorded loops from soundtrack. Is soundtrack a program?

[livingdeadboy]

Is soundtrack a program? Yeah sorry, should have specified. Its a music program for Mac.

[DjfunkmasterG]

Hey Dude, I just checked out your flick and I have to say good job. It was well shot, and the writing was really good. Well done! I have some issues with the film. The pitched down voice for your vampires needs work. It makes a lot of the dialogue inaudible. I had to rewind back and turn up the volume just to understand a lot of what they were saying. Pacing... Is a little off, but nothing major. The highlight for me was the writing and the scene in the bathroom. The dialog was fantastic especially when the vampire friend was talking about whether or not he would take pity on his human friend or just kill him. All in all I would give it a 7 out of 10. Is this your 2nd or 3rd film? Ya know what no matter. it is good and I was entertained. Job well done!

[livingdeadboy]

Hey Dude, I just checked out your flick and I have to say good job. It was well shot, and the writing was really good. Well done! I have some issues with the film. The pitched down voice for your vampires needs work. It makes a lot of the dialogue inaudible. I had to rewind back and turn up the volume just to understand a lot of what they were saying. Pacing... Is a little off, but nothing major. The highlight for me was the writing and the scene in the bathroom. The dialog was fantastic especially when the vampire friend was talking about whether or not he would take pity on his human friend or just kill him. All in all I would give it a 7 out of 10. Is this your 2nd or 3rd film? Ya know what no matter. it is good and I was entertained. Job well done! Thanks dude, it's probably my 13th flick i think. Sheesh that sound quality must really be awfull online, cause you can hear what I am saying there perfectly on dvd...bizzzzarrre. Its obviously just the compression of the video file...gahh.

[LoSTBoY]

The deep voice on the vampire can be missed. Unless he looks physically changed then there is no need for it. But if you really need it, try something else...it doesn't sound right. Half the time I couldn't understand it. Your the vampire, right? Not bad. The other guy can do with some lessons. Cool though.

[MapMan]

Good job.

[chukrok]

Overall, nice work. I agree about the voice thing, but again, good job.