what will make my story good?

[DJ.doucheBAG]

I'm trying to write a story, but need to know what people think about what makes a good story. What should i avoid in my writing and what should i add? I don't think alot of the stories in our fiction section delve enough into these peoples thoughts and feelings about how living in this new world makes them feel. I want to do this and at the same time make it intense and action packed! Do any authors out there know what I'm talking about? Does anybody have any thoughts to contribute?

[Danny]

origionality man, simple as that, no romero rip off like so many, many others, make it up as you go along, as long as you like it **** everyone else! *insert thumb up here!*

[Arcades057]

20 bucks says that was the Northern Song guy again.

[Danny]

whoever it was there ass got banned so yeah it probably was, why does that guy seem so intent on keep cominc here? *shrugs*.

[Arcades057]

1) No life 2) No girlfriend 3) No job 4) Just a loser 5) Glutton for punishment One of the above maybe.

[Adrenochrome]

1) No life 2) No girlfriend 3) No job 4) Just a loser 5) Glutton for punishment One of the above maybe. actually, it was nothing you said.....sheesh!

[Dommm]

Plenty of detail. suspense and dont always explain everything off. I think these are the best stories

[Danny]

...uhh...dommm...you know this guys banned now right?

[Deadman_Deluxe]

I'm trying to write a story, but need to know what people think about what makes a good story. What should i avoid in my writing and what should i add? I don't think alot of the stories in our fiction section delve enough into these peoples thoughts and feelings about how living in this new world makes them feel. I want to do this and at the same time make it intense and action packed! Do any authors out there know what I'm talking about? Does anybody have any thoughts to contribute? I think your story would benefit greatly if you chopped off your own hands and put them in a blender.

[AssassinFromHell]

1) No life 2) No girlfriend 3) No job 4) Just a loser 5) Glutton for punishment One of the above maybe. Or it could be No Boyfriend

[Danny]

hahaha.... ...he insinuated he was a homesexual....... *snigger*..... id like to think this is an intelligent forum myself

[AssassinFromHell]

hahaha.... ...he insinuated he was a homesexual....... *snigger*..... id like to think this is an intelligent forum myself dis iz a intelligent forum. way kewl.

[Dommm]

hmmm didnt realise he was banned ahhh welll

[Arcades057]

I think DD's suggestion is best. Also you could possibly write a story about a 15 year old moody kid who saves the head cheerleader and gets in her pants while watching the jock quarterback ex-boyfriend getting eaten alive by zombies; can't forget the witty comments by the hero and the katana-swinging. Of course the kid must have an arsenal of big guns under his bed (think .50 anti-material rifles and GAU chainguns). That'll make your story really good.

[Deadman_Deluxe]

I think DD's suggestion is best. I hate to blow my own trombone ... but so do i .... hahahaha