Zombie serial: They Shall Inherit - Comments thread

[Tullaryx]

I wanted to separate the two so I can repost all the chapters I've written, so far, without them being interrupted with comments. I don't know if I'll submit this to the official fiction dudes, since it being a serialized series there's really no end to it. So, the first chapter is up and will be followed-up by a few smaller chapters that occur at the same time frame, or at least close to it. I hope you all read, enjoy, hate, rip, anticipate and everything else in between. I always appreciate any feedback, comments, critiques and advice. Just post them here.

[Skydog]

I've really enjoyed this so far Tullaryx. I like the style you've used to break up the chapters. The characters are good for the start of a story, I like the portrayal of several of them. I look forward to reading more.