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    Just been bitten 7734's Avatar
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    just cuz i was bored

    just when you thought it was safe
    to roam the streets at night
    you find yourself surrounded
    by a twisted hellish plight

    they're slow, they shamble
    it seems easy to run away
    but just around the corner
    there's another, skin cracked and grey

    two weeks ago
    when your lovely sister died
    and chased you through the house
    it seemed so silly to hide

    after all she was small,
    only ten last september
    was that your father's eyeball in her mouth?
    if only you could remember

    if only you had more time
    to find your daddy's gun
    you wouldn't feel so helpless
    you could fight back instead of run

    so out the door! into the street!
    move quick and find some help!
    think not of little Jenny
    and Papa's gurgled yelp

    your neighboors, once alive
    crippled on the streets
    each one drowning in a pool
    of intestines and pureed beets

    each one slowly rising
    looking famished, wanting you
    each one living dead
    wanting human stew

    you dodge a few
    knock down the rest
    you can think, you can scream
    you can feel a heart within your chest

    you can feel your lungs
    refill and contract
    you wish you had said no to smoke
    and they might be intact

    the acid in your muscles
    will eventually grind them to a halt
    the treadmill was downstairs
    laziness was your fault

    and now you're unprepared
    to face this wicked curse
    every breath you huff in fear
    multiplies your thirst

    the supermarkets open
    but obviously you're too scared
    no food or water for you today
    not one second to be spared

    where's the cops, the swat,
    the helping hands you need?
    where's the tranquil summer breeze,
    or a moment to drink and feed?

    focus on the most important
    aspect of this day
    your Gods, they have abandoned you
    and turned you into prey

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    Coolness. Well done, dude, well done!
    Originally Posted by EvilNed
    As a much wiser man than I once said: "We must stop the banning - or loose the war."

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    This should be submitted to the fiction section.

    I don't enjoy poems as a general rule of thumb, but I enjoyed this one.
    Oblivion gallops closer, favoring the spur, sparing the rein - I think we will be gone soon

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    Once upon a time
    We bustled on our way
    Sleeping at the switch
    It was that kind of day

    There there came the rising
    Which no pundit had foreseen
    The population panicked
    Real facts remained unseen

    Pulpits preached of Judgment
    Science hemmed and hawwed
    Some said "It's a virus!"
    Others blamed the will of God

    That's all beside the point
    The dead are on their way
    We fat, we soft, we lazy
    Now it's time to pay

    One herd against another
    Cattle led down the chute
    They find joy in viscera
    We scream, we run, we shoot

    The breathing seek safe haven
    The shambling content to wait
    In seconds flat our nature will
    Ourselves obliterate

    First will come the discord
    Chests are thumped and pounded
    No attention paid the fact
    That our trail is hounded

    All the time they're out there
    Barbarians at the gate
    Focused on but one thing
    A hunger they long to sate

    Our sanctuary's crumbled
    Its their time at last
    The living blew their chances
    And now their time is past

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    Sorry couldn't resist. It's complete doggerel and doesn't even hold to a consistent meter, but maybe someone will get a laugh out of it.

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    No we don't want to hurt you, we want to show you the light and make you one of us, come on in the water is fine.

    I really hope it wont be one heard against another, I like the herds banding together to speak to the ranchers, with the love we were taught by Jesus Christ.
    Google ("Silent Weapons for Quiet Wars" "Must Read Article") both terms. It is a red pill about the 53-54 revolution, if you read the entire thread and all the links.

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    He's like a virus!!!! ^
    Last edited by clanglee; 20-Nov-2007 at 07:35 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
    "When the dead walk, we must stop the killing, or lose the war."

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    Very nice poems. I enjoyed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by clanglee View Post
    He's like a virus!!!! ^
    I have said it on another post, but something about all of it is sucking the fun out of HPOTD.
    Originally Posted by EvilNed
    As a much wiser man than I once said: "We must stop the banning - or loose the war."

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    Thanks Major,
    I thought the 1st one was better, had better commentary laced in it for one thing...made it more GARish (no pun intended). But glad someone enjoyed my little off-the-cuff piece.

    Redge, never spoken to you before and since I'm just about as new here and your words to me were meant well, if a bit creepy, I'm going to tell you something my Mom told me growing up thats never failed me in life, getting into a woman's bed or getting out of getting my ass kicked.

    "Its never what you say, but how you say it that count"

    This is NOT meant to condescend in any way, I'll be saddened if its taken as such. But when you truly understand that saying of my mother's no one here will have any beef at all with you anymore.

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    good stuff i like the poems
    we keep it real gangsta down here in canada. ehh

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