New Book Prologue and Chapter One Input

[Mitchified]

I'm in the process of writing my second of a series of novels, and I'd appreciate any input that I can get on it. I've posted the prologue and the first chapter here:

http://thewordofmitch.blogspot.com

There might be some typos or formatting issues, so I apologize for those in advance. The typos will get caught during the editing process and the formatting is due to the, erm, "fun" of bringing a Word document over to a blog site.

Thanks ahead of time for any input.