deadpunk
18-Dec-2010, 05:39 AM
This is my first non-LD contribution to the site. While I don't suppose it to be my best work posted here, I do confess that it is my favorite.
I've been a long time fan of the pulp genre and tried very hard to give this particular story that same gritty feel. (Although I don't generally like doing stories in the first person POV as I feel its cheatingly easy ;))
I'm hoping for feedback on this story via this thread or in the author comments, as I would really like to rewrite it someday. I'd love to flesh it out a bit, and make it longer (although it felt right when I was writing it). I like Cross, and would like to do more with his character, I'm just not sure what...
Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy.
I've been a long time fan of the pulp genre and tried very hard to give this particular story that same gritty feel. (Although I don't generally like doing stories in the first person POV as I feel its cheatingly easy ;))
I'm hoping for feedback on this story via this thread or in the author comments, as I would really like to rewrite it someday. I'd love to flesh it out a bit, and make it longer (although it felt right when I was writing it). I like Cross, and would like to do more with his character, I'm just not sure what...
Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy.