dracenstein
26-Dec-2006, 12:17 PM
I had once thought of writing the above, but Loren D Estleman had already written it. I tracked it down and read it, overall, an enjoyable read, but ultimately, unsatisfied.
Estleman's question had been: What was Dracula doing when not 'seen' in Dracula?
Answer: He was battling Holmes and Watson.
My question would have been: Who was Dracula feeding on between Lucy and Mina?
Answer: The girl in the cart-wheel hat. Mina Harker's Journal, 22 September.
From journal; The Harkers had just come back to London and Harker saw Dracula, '...he gazed at a tall, thin man with a beaky nose and black moustache and pointed beard, who was also observing the pretty girl.' 'a man came out of the small shop with a small parcel, and gave it to the lady, who then drove off. The dark man kept his eyes fixed on her, and when the carriage moved up Piccadilly he followed in the same direction, and hailed a hansom.'
My story would have been; Watson would be treating the girl and upon seeing the marks on her throat, summon Holmes, thinking she was being poisoned. Holmes would not believe in vampires, until one night he saw Dracula in the girl's house, a mirror behind him, Dracula having no reflection. Holmes has a hard time coming to terms with it, doing so only because he would go insane with 'fantasies'. This delay causes the girl to die. Holmes chases Dracula (with unknowing help from van Helsing's group, but will find out their involvement) out of England, giving van Helsing the ship's name. It would probably have Watson staking the girl, believing it was his responsibility.
Thoughts?
:)
Estleman's question had been: What was Dracula doing when not 'seen' in Dracula?
Answer: He was battling Holmes and Watson.
My question would have been: Who was Dracula feeding on between Lucy and Mina?
Answer: The girl in the cart-wheel hat. Mina Harker's Journal, 22 September.
From journal; The Harkers had just come back to London and Harker saw Dracula, '...he gazed at a tall, thin man with a beaky nose and black moustache and pointed beard, who was also observing the pretty girl.' 'a man came out of the small shop with a small parcel, and gave it to the lady, who then drove off. The dark man kept his eyes fixed on her, and when the carriage moved up Piccadilly he followed in the same direction, and hailed a hansom.'
My story would have been; Watson would be treating the girl and upon seeing the marks on her throat, summon Holmes, thinking she was being poisoned. Holmes would not believe in vampires, until one night he saw Dracula in the girl's house, a mirror behind him, Dracula having no reflection. Holmes has a hard time coming to terms with it, doing so only because he would go insane with 'fantasies'. This delay causes the girl to die. Holmes chases Dracula (with unknowing help from van Helsing's group, but will find out their involvement) out of England, giving van Helsing the ship's name. It would probably have Watson staking the girl, believing it was his responsibility.
Thoughts?
:)