making a zombie movie

[georgefox]

im just wondering if you have any ideas about the script that i am posting
im a 13 year old filmaker and havea dad who owns a tv production company so i have access to pro HD cameras and a full avid editing suite

plz post cooments on the script





the movie opens in a familys back yard there is a boy named ash a little girl and a mom and a dad named kevin. they are barbqueing steaks the camera follows ash as he walks into the garage and goes to get something cut o a shot of a zombie running into thier backyard cut back inside the garage ash is grabing a tool then a high pitched scream is heard the camer turns to a medium close up of ash looling through a hole in the door he sees the zombie biting the mothers neck spewing blood out of his mouth and there is blood squirting out of the wound she falls down cut to a shot following behind a zombie the zombie runs bites the girl on the neck more blood squirts out the girl falls down dead then cut to a shot of kevin grabing a steak knife from the barbque and stabing the zombie through the eye then ash comes out of the garage and then cut to a medium long shot of the mother and the girl getting up the dad walks over to them then they both start attacking him he is telling them "let me ****ing go' but they dont stop close up shots following the action off them scrambling around on the floor them spewing blood. ash takes a crowbar and smashes their skulls with lots of blood.. kevin gets up and is kinda shaking cut to a shot tilting from feet to head at a medium speed he is covered in blood and brain matter. they go inside and lock the door cut to a shot of kevin calling 911 the message on the line says that they are currently busy he waits on they phone for 30 seconds. he slams the phone down


kevin

"what the **** is ****ing going on"


. outside they hear screams and sirens and gunshots. cut to a montage of zombie attacks including a man with a shot gun is shooting the zombies running towards him more zombies are coming from the sides and he starts panicing as the zombies are getting closer shooting one shot after another and saying "****ing **** you mother****in assholes he then starts to walk backwards continuing to shoot then a zombie jumps on his back he tries to shake him off then the zombie bites his ear the skin streches then he slowly falls backwards as the zombies all jump on him cut to a shot from the side showing the zombies in a circle all around him tearing out organs and there is lotsa blood spraying up`, a woman and her son are running from a group of the infected the woman trips


woman
no honey just keep going
the son runs back towards his mom as the zombies attack them they start biting the womans face while they eat the sons leggs



it is the next day ash and Kevin are watching the news
ash gets up
ash
**** this i cant stand watching the god damn tv anymore im going out side
to see for my self whats going on


kevin
you cant go out there

ash
im going to the backyard ill be back

ash gets up and leaves the room

continuos hand held shot following ash walking out side
ash hears a noise turns around and sees a zombie running at him the zombie pushes him to the ground they roll around the zombie is spitting blood
they continue to roll around

ash
help someone help this ****in things going to kill me
then just as the zombie is about to bite his neck the zombie gets shot in the heart covering ash in blood

max
did you get any blood in your eyes or mouth

ash
no **** no wait why do you care

max
its a virus its transmitted by blood

ash
but if its a virus then why after you die you get back up

max
because if you get bit and you die but the virus starts a chemical reaction in your body that causes your heart to start beating again and makes you go ****in insane


ash
how the **** do you know all this ****

max
my dad he was a biological weapon engineer he told me about this virus the iranians were designing that is suposed to infect a mass populace very quickly and cause the infected to go and infect more people

ash
then why the **** is it here in toronto

max
i dont know and because i know your going to ask there is no ****ing cure no vaccine nothing

ash
so your pretty much saying that we are totally ****ed

max
yep we are so ****ing screwed


ash
im sorry i forgot to say thanks for saving my ****in life

max
no problem

ash
so wheres your family

max
there dead their all ****in dead

ash
do ya wanta stay with us

max
fine

they start to walk inside shot of the camera zooming out from the body showing a hole in the zombies chest and the ground covered in blood

cut to a shot of ash and max walking inside

ash
dad this is max he is stayin with us

max
hey thanks for lettin g me stay here

ash
max knows why these ****in things are here


cut to a shot of them sitting at the kitchen table

ash
its been two ****ing days and still no help we have got to do some thing

kevin
i agree what do we need to do

ash
we have to first fill up any containers we have with water because we dont know when the water supply will run out

max
ok ill do that


ash
we`ve got to round up all the weapons and ammo\


cut to the next day looking up at them looking at a table

ash
ok as far as guns we`ve got 3 m4s 2 shotguns 4 berretas 2 m1911s
2 walther p99s

kevin
ok we each get an m4 me and ash get a shot gun we each get a berreta
ash and max get a m1911 and me and george get a walther

max
we dont have nearly enough food

kevin
in 3 days lets go to the grocery stor in the car get a bunch of food

ash max
ok


cut to 2 days later max and ash are watching a movie and then the power gets shut off

ash
what the hell was that

max
i dont ****in know

kevin walks in the room with a flashlight


kevin
are you guys ok

ash
yeah were fine

kevin
i think we just blew a fuse ill go down and reset the breakers

shot following kevin as he decends down the stairs he walks into the room with the fuses there is no sound whatsoever exept for his foot steps and breathing he moves the flashlight around the room sees nothing and opens the box with the fuses he hears something he turns around and a zombie jumps down from a peice of funature and pulls him down the zombie spits blood he starts smashing the zombies head with the back of it until he cracks the skull and screws up the brain he resets the circuts and the lights comeback on

ash
what the hell happened to you


kevin
max can you hand me a towel

max
sure

the next night

they are in the kitchen getting on gear and loadin weapons

kevin
all ready to go

max
**** yeah lets kick some zombie ass

ash
lets get the hell outa here

they go outside there are no zombies on the street they walk to the car open up the doors and get in

cut to a shot of them pulling in to the parking lot they get out and 15 zombies start running after them they start shooting them then run into the store one of them pulls out a shotgun and blows a zombie head off

ash
man i blew the mother ****ers head off

they run into the store and start loading up carts with food

they drive down the street and see the street fairly clear but still a few zombies they open up the windows and begin fireing on the zombies they get out and open the trunk and carry the stuff in while max covers them

max
` come on hurry up the the infected are getting too ****in
close


they head inside and begin to lay the food out on the table they begin to disscus where they should go from here

kevin
i dont think we can stay here much longer

max
why cant we?

ash
hey look theres a girl out there

max
we see infected chicks all the time

ash
shes not infected

max turns his head to the window

max
kevin there really is a chick there

ash grabs a gun off the table and opens up the door and runs down the street

Cherry
ahhh can someone ****in help me

ash runs towards the girl while blasting the zombie with his shot gun as he gets closer a zombie runs towards the girl when it is 2 feet away ash shoots the zombie in the chest covering Cherry with blood
he grabs her hand and pulls her up the street towards the house he gets her inside
they sit down in the living room max and kevin come in




ash
so whats your name?

Cherry
its Cherry




continues on next post

[georgefox]

kevin
so Cherry how the hell did you get here


Cherry
i was at my 14th birthday party when some **** head decided
to crash it but he started spiting blood everywhere he bit a bunch of my friends then they got back up and started chasing me that was a day ago ive been running ever since

ash gets up and gets a cloth for Cherry

ash
heres a cloth i thought you might need it seeing that you are covered in blood and chunks of flesh

Cherry
thanks

kevin
so back to what we were talking about before i think we should go up north to orilla


max
i really dont want to go up there


ash
my dad does have a point theres less people up there so
that means a lot less zombies hey Cherry what do you think


Cherry
i dont know i guess if there are less of those things it would be better


kevin
so i guess were going when do you want to go


ash
how about 3 or 4 days

kevin
ok hey max come with me i want you to help me round up some batteries

max and kevin leave the room

Cherry
thanks for um saving me

ash
your welcome

Cherry
come over here

ash
why
ash gets up and sits beside Cherry

ash
what do you want

Cherry
just to thank you

ash
but you already..

Cherry gives ash a hug they stay like this for a while kevin walks by the door

kevin
what are you doing

Cherry
just thanking him

ash
dad can you kinda go away

kevin
uhh sure


2 days later

ash and Cherry and max are outside they are practicing shooting for targets they are using an infected tied to a tree

ash
so Cherry to get good hits never shoot on full auto
just use semi or burst



Cherry
ok

ash takes a shot at the infected and hits it right in the balls blood shoots out the zombie spits blood and shakes very violently

max
nice shot man

ash
you know im a way better shot than you

the next day
inside they are getting all the supplies ready to load in the car

kevin
are you guys ready to go

Cherry
yeah we are

they grab some guns and start shooting zombies while kevin loads the car


they are sitting inside the car now they are going past farms

ash
on our way to the house can we stop in town i want to pick up some stuff

Cherry
can we please

kevin

ok but i dont want anyone going anywhere alone


the car pulls into the town the sun is setting they pull up in front of a conveinence store the streets are empty they get out witth their weapons drawn they walk up to the door break open a lock and walk in they cover their noses because there is rotten food and the clerk is lying dead on the ground they walk around ash grabs a bunch of popand chips and they leave the store once outside they hear growls and footsteps of the infected runing down the street they jump in the car and drive off


max
man there were a lot of them back there

kevin
were almost here

when they turn down the street they see many zombies they roll down the windows and begin to shoot the zombies many of the zombies run towards them some of them get shot

Cherry
i dont think we can get all of them

kevin
ok new plan lets run these ****ers down

kevin floors the car and they get faster then they hit two zombies one of them goes flying away the other rolls on the hood
and gets up and spits blood on the windsheild kevin brakes hard and the zombie goes flying off the hood and slams into two other zombies


max
look that zombie looks like a stripper but she only has one leg

kevin
ive seen some crazy **** before but i have never seen me a one legged stripper


they pull into the drive way and get out and shoot the zombies that are left.

ash
come on lets go we gotta unload the stuff before the next wave of infected get here

they grab stuff and run to the door kevin pulls out a key and uses it on the lock they walk inside and set the stuff down

kevin
**** i forgot to lock the car

he walks out side he goes up to the car and presses the lock button nothing happens he tries it again still nothing then he spins around and sees 5 or 6 zombies coming after him

kevin
hey guys a little help

ash and max run out with thier weapons they shoot the zombies but the one that is left jumps on kevin and spits blood in his eyes

kevin
ash i love you

ash
dad whats wrong

kevin
im infected

ash
no


kevin starts shaking and screaming he begins to spit blood he gets up and starts banging on the car he smashes his head on the hood spits blood all over the winsheild he claws at the skin on his arms causing them to bleed he spits blood all over the ground

max
we have to kill him

ash
cant we just tie him up

max
im not going to be the one to do it

` ash
but he`s my dad


max
that things not you dad anymore

kevin continues to thrash on the ground

ash walks over to kevin and smashes the back of his head with the butt of his gun kevin falls down

ash
someone get me some rope


Cherry runs out with some rope

they are inside now kevin is tied up on the ground
ash is sitting at the table with glazed eyes Cherry walks over


Cherry
ash you okay

ash
what do you think my dad just turned into a ****ing infected

she gives ash a hug

Cherry
its okay we will find out how to cure this

ash
yeah ok im ****in hungry

cherry
ill make you something

cherry gets up and goes through the food

cherry
do you want kraft dinner or soup

[Trencher]

Whenever I hear "a thirteen year old could write a better script" from now on I will think of this. You just wrote a better script than all the low budget zombie films I have seen the last five years. And that is a lot. This is great stuff, I really like the old school attitude you have in this manuscript.
I say you should try to make this movie, even if you do not get to sell it it will still be good practice for you. The guy who made signs started making movies when he was about your age and I think that the guy who made star wars also started that young.
If I am to give you practical advice I would say take out the swearing and maybe the part where you have to kill your zombie dad. He is the one who wll borrow you the camera and stuff after all heh heh. Also dont bite over more than you can chew try to keep it short at least for your first movies. And if people complains over your spelling errors then remember that beeing a good speller have never earned a person millions of dollars but beeing a creative writer or director has.
Good luck onward!

[georgefox]

Whenever I hear "a thirteen year old could write a better script" from now on I will think of this. You just wrote a better script than all the low budget zombie films I have seen the last five years. And that is a lot. This is great stuff, I really like the old school attitude you have in this manuscript.
I say you should try to make this movie, even if you do not get to sell it it will still be good practice for you. The guy who made signs started making movies when he was about your age and I think that the guy who made star wars also started that young.
If I am to give you practical advice I would say take out the swearing and maybe the part where you have to kill your zombie dad. He is the one who wll borrow you the camera and stuff after all heh heh. Also dont bite over more than you can chew try to keep it short at least for your first movies. And if people complains over your spelling errors then remember that beeing a good speller have never earned a person millions of dollars but beeing a creative writer or director has.
Good luck onward!

thanks for the advice

oh and i forgot the catch is we only have 5 grand to do it

[DjfunkmasterG]

George,

as a low budget filmmaker myself I read your script and I want to say first that taking on a project at 13 is a noble effort and I wish you tons of luck, but I need to give you some advice on your script. I had some issues with my first film and they were related tot he script and I realized the mistakes I made so I want to help you avoid those same mistakes.

1. No parent would ever allow their 13-14 year old child talk like this in front of them. The language you have them using is too unrealistic. I really don't know of a father of a 13 yr old who would allow his child to say Goddamn, and f**k and whatever curse words as free flowing as you have them doing it. Tame down the language

2. Naming your characters Ash and Cherry, is nice when making an homage fan film to Evil Dead and grindhouse, but again in a zombie film even low budget this is an un-needed cliche and very eye rolling. People will tear this apart based on the fact you have pre-teens named ash and cherry. Although zombie films are a fantasy based gimmick, they need to be grounded in as much reality as possible. Change the characters names.

3. When Cherry hugs Ash and the dad walks by and questions what they are doing... Ummm, no parent would let children this young keep doing and they sure as hell wouldn't just walk away even if the kid asked him to do that.

4. Don't use the word zombies at anytime in your script. Remember people don't know what they really are and it is good to just refer to them as "things" or "monsters"

5. Having ash Brag he is a better shot than max when max says to him "Nice Shot" is crude and rude. You are trying to establish ash as a hero, not an asshole. So change that line. You have the potential for a good character and a likable one but that line of dialog made him come off like an ass.

6. Having the father drive through a group of zombies... Not going to happen on a $5,000 budget. Having him maybe run over one zombie is doable, but a group... no way. Because of your age you will never get the streets closed or the insurance to back this up, not too mention the cost of the insurance to do this type of stunt will suck up the entire $5K and more. One thing I learned is you have to keep the script in tone with your budget. a Mistake I made on Deadlands: the Rising. While I was able to get a lot of stunts done, certain things had to be dropped or toned down to fit the budget.

7. Using dialog from Planet Terror is not going to really help you. I can see you really enjoy that film because a lot of the dialog and scenes are direct lifts. it is ok to reference a favorite film, but to blatantly borrow from it.... is a big no no.

8. Ash's dad has just turned into one of the infect and in less than a minute you have him acting like it is no big thing. Any 13 yr old who loses a parent, no matter how tough they are is not going to be functional or rational that fast.

You have a good concept behind the story, but not a lot of thought was put into how to make the concept flow correctly. Keep in mind you yourself are 13 years old, and with how fast the zombie infection starts and how fast the story progresses you have ash going from being a normal kid to RAMBO in 2 days time.

You have $5,000.00 to work with, which is good, but keep in mind a few things. Of that $5,000 how much are you going to need for production insurance, make-up FX, food for the cast & crew, equipment.

A decent camera will suck up a fifth of your budget ($1,000) a really good camera will take up half.

Make-up FX... Though you never give a definitive count of zombies I potentially see the need for 100+ at certain points in the script. Make-up supplies for 100+ zombies is going to run $500-$700 at a minimum, and keep this in mind, you won't get every shot you need in one day so you have to be able to get those 100+ back and make them up again.

FOOD - I guessing none of the actors will get paid, so in order to make them feel needed and as a way of thanking them you have to feed them. On my new film trapped the night I had 100 zombies it cost me $90.00 to feed the zombies and the other 25 people in the cast & crew. Pizza isn't going to always cut it, but it is doable. If you do pizza have your mom or dad call around to pizza places and explain you are making a film and in trade for screen credit could they give you pizza at a discount. Domino's and Papa Johns did this for us on Deadlands: The Rising.

Equipment - From the looks of your script you are going to need lighting and a generator. Any old generator will not work. You need to rent a quiet generator so it doesn't interfere with sound. Generator rental can cost about $100 a day. A regular generator for home use will not work because they are too loud, you will need to contact a film equipment rental house.

STUNTS - your current script requires stunt driving and stunt people (Running over zombies) and the closing of a road. Most communities will not just close a road during the day so you can shoot a movie because of the impact it can have on a community. also you are doing a very dangerous stunt which will require general liability insurance of at least $5,000,000, plus workmans comp in case anyone gets hurt.

Here is my suggestion... tone down the story as best you can. The dialog is very unrealistic. Finding a convenience store to shoot at might not be a problem... so keep that in your story, but have the zombies swarm the parking lot and make your escape more impossible. The closing of a street isn't that easy. I got lucky in Deadlands with the 4 lane highway because it actually was a dead end road that went nowhere. If you use friends work with them on camera. I used close friends for Deadlands and had to give them extra takes until they felt comfortable to make it seem more believable. So rehearse as much as possible.

Also don't forget using friends means you have to get their parents permission, and they will have to sign a waiver to let their child participate. No distributor would touch a filmed filled with people under 18 unless you can supply the needed consent forms because of child labor laws.

I don't want this to discourage you, as i want to help you and see you make your dream come true. When members make a comment saying your script is better than half the low budget stuff they have watched shows to me they know nothing about the filmmaking process other wise they would not have made that comment. This is not going to be an easy task man... making a film takes a lot of time and a lot of patience. You have to be quick and dirty but you also have to make sure it looks good and doesn't look hokey.

If you have any questions just post them. there are enough filmmakers in this forum that can help point you in the right direction.

Gary

[georgefox]

gary thx for advice
first we alredy have an hd camera
the level of swearing needs to be toned down
as for the driving it is shot on avery quiet street up north and can be done with really cheap dummies
ash is supposed to be kinda an ass
the part where cherry hugs ash by this point the dad is problaby detreriorating and he can see that we may be the last left so he would want the earth to repopulate not now but later

and about make up i have some experience with zombies using latex appliances and tissue paper also the zombies are just covered in blood mostly and do not look very dead more like 28 days zombies

as for the amount of zombies you will never see more than 10 at once and for much of it it will be dark so i can use zombies over again

and for consent the kids parents i know very well and they would easily sign a consent form

and i am putting filming on hold for a few years because i want to perfect the script and get more money

my dad who was working with stride gum said that he asked them about funding this because they are funding many viral videos and they said they might consider it

[georgefox]

the movie opens in a familys back yard there is a boy named GEORGE a little girl and a mom and a dad named kevin. they are barbqueing steaks the camera follows GEORGE as he walks into the garage and goes to get something cut o a shot of a zombie running into thier backyard cut back inside the garage GEORGE is grabing a tool then a high pitched scream is heard the camer turns to a medium close up of GEORGE looling through a hole in the door he sees the zombie biting the mothers neck spewing blood out of his mouth and there is blood squirting out of the wound she falls down cut to a shot following behind a zombie the zombie runs bites the girl on the neck more blood squirts out the girl falls down dead then cut to a shot of kevin grabing a steak knife from the barbque and stabing the zombie through the eye then GEORGE comes out of the garage and then cut to a medium long shot of the mother and the girl getting up the dad walks over to them then they both start attacking him he is telling them "let me ****ing go' but they dont stop close up shots following the action off them scrambling around on the floor them spewing blood. GEORGE takes a crowbar and smGEORGEes their skulls with lots of blood.. kevin gets up and is kinda shaking cut to a shot tilting from feet to head at a medium speed he is covered in blood and brain matter. they go inside and lock the door cut to a shot of kevin calling 911 the message on the line says that they are currently busy he waits on they phone for 30 seconds. he slams the phone down and starts screaming "what the **** is ****ing going on"
he starts to cry. outside they hear screams and sirens and gunshots. cut to a montage of zombie attacks including a man with a shot gun is shooting the zombies running towards him more zombies are coming from the sides and he starts panicing as the zombies are getting closer shooting one shot after another and saying "****ing **** you mother****in assholes he then starts to walk backwards continuing to shoot then a zombie jumps on his back he tries to shake him off then the zombie bites his ear the skin streches then he slowly falls backwards as the zombies all jump on him cut to a shot from the side showing the zombies in a circle all around him tearing out organs and there is lotsa blood spraying up`

GEORGE gets up
GEORGE
**** this i cant stand watching the god damn tv anymore im going out side
to see for my self whats going on


kevin
you cant go out there

GEORGE
im going to the backyard ill be back

GEORGE gets up and leaves the room

continuos hand held shot following GEORGE walking out side
GEORGE hears a noise turns around and sees a zombie running at him the zombie pushes him to the ground they roll around the zombie is spitting blood
they continue to roll around

GEORGE
help someone help this ****in things going to kill me
then just as the zombie is about to bite his neck the zombie gets shot in the heart covering GEORGE in blood

max
did you get any blood in your eyes or mouth

GEORGE
no **** no wait why do you care

max
its a virus its transmitted by blood

GEORGE
but if its a virus then why after you die you get back up

max
because if you get bit and you die but the virus starts a chemical reaction in your body that causes your heart to start beating again and makes you go ****in insane


GEORGE
how the **** do you know all this ****

max
my dad he was a biological weapon engineer he told me about this virus the iranians were designing that is suposed to infect a mass populace very quickly and cause the infected to go and infect more people

GEORGE
then why the **** is it here in toronto

max
i dont know and because i know your going to ask there is no ****ing cure no vaccine nothing

GEORGE
so your pretty much saying that we are totally ****ed

max
yep we are so ****ing screwed


GEORGE
im sorry i forgot to say thanks for saving my ****in life

max
no problem

GEORGE
so wheres your family

max
there dead their all ****in dead

GEORGE
do ya wanta stay with us

max
fine

they start to walk inside shot of the camera zooming out from the body showing a hole in the zombies chest and the ground covered in blood

cut to a shot of GEORGE and max walking inside

GEORGE
dad this is max he is stayin with us

max
hey thanks for lettin g me stay here

GEORGE
max knows why these ****in things are here


cut to a shot of them sitting at the kitchen table

GEORGE
its been two ****ing days and still no help we have got to do some thing

kevin
i agree what do we need to do

GEORGE
we have to first fill up any containers we have with water because we dont know when the water supply will run out

max
ok ill do that


GEORGE
we`ve got to round up all the weapons and ammo\


cut to the next day looking up at them looking at a table

GEORGE
ok as far as guns we`ve got 3 m4s 2 shotguns 4 berretas 2 m1911s
2 walther p99s

kevin
ok we each get an m4 me and GEORGE get a shot gun we each get a berreta
GEORGE and max get a m1911 and me and george get a walther

max
we dont have nearly enough food

kevin
in 3 days lets go to the grocery stor in the car get a bunch of food

GEORGE max
ok


cut to 2 days later max and GEORGE are watching a movie and then the power gets shut off

GEORGE
what the hell was that

max
i dont ****in know

kevin walks in the room with a flGEORGElight


kevin
are you guys ok

GEORGE
yeah were fine

kevin
i think we just blew a fuse ill go down and reset the breakers

shot following kevin as he decends down the stairs he walks into the room with the fuses there is no sound whatsoever exept for his foot steps and breathing he moves the flGEORGElight around the room sees nothing and opens the box with the fuses he hears something he turns around and a zombie jumps down from a peice of funature and pulls him down the zombie spits blood he starts smGEORGEing the zombies head with the back of it until he cracks the skull and screws up the brain he resets the circuts and the lights comeback on

GEORGE
what the hell happened to you


kevin
max can you hand me a towel

max
sure

the next night

they are in the kitchen getting on gear and loadin weapons

kevin
all ready to go

max
**** yeah lets kick some zombie ass

GEORGE
lets get the hell outa here

they go outside there are no zombies on the street they walk to the car open up the doors and get in

cut to a shot of them pulling in to the parking lot they get out and 15 zombies start running after them they start shooting them then run into the store one of them pulls out a shotgun and blows a zombie head off

GEORGE
man i blew the mother ****ers head off

they run into the store and start loading up carts with food

they drive down the street and see the street fairly clear but still a few zombies they open up the windows and begin fireing on the zombies they get out and open the trunk and carry the stuff in while max covers them

max
` come on hurry up the the infected are getting too ****in
close


they head inside and begin to lay the food out on the table they begin to disscus where they should go from here

kevin
i dont think we can stay here much longer

max
why cant we?

GEORGE
hey look theres a girl out there

max
we see infected chicks all the time

GEORGE
shes not infected

max turns his head to the window

max
kevin there really is a chick there

GEORGE grabs a gun off the table and opens up the door and runs down the street

JESSICA
ahhh can someone ****in help me

GEORGE runs towards the girl while blasting the zombie with his shot gun as he gets closer a zombie runs towards the girl when it is 2 feet away GEORGE shoots the zombie in the chest covering JESSICA with blood
he grabs her hand and pulls her up the street towards the house he gets her inside
they sit down in the living room max and kevin come in




GEORGE
so whats your name?

JESSICA
its JESSICA


kevin
so JESSICA how the hell did you get here


JESSICA
i was at my 14th birthday party when some **** head decided
to crGEORGE it but he started spiting blood everywhere he bit a bunch of my friends then they got back up and started chasing me that was a day ago ive been running ever since

GEORGE gets up and gets a cloth for JESSICA

GEORGE
heres a cloth i thought you might need it seeing that you are covered in blood and chunks of flesh

JESSICA
thanks

kevin
so back to what we were talking about before i think we should go up north to orilla


max
i really dont want to go up there


GEORGE
my dad does have a point theres less people up there so
that means a lot less zombies hey JESSICA what do you think


JESSICA
i dont know i guess if there are less of those things it would be better


kevin
so i guess were going when do you want to go


GEORGE
how about 3 or 4 days

kevin
ok hey max come with me i want you to help me round up some batteries

max and kevin leave the room

JESSICA
thanks for um saving me

GEORGE
your welcome

[georgefox]

2 days later

GEORGE and JESSICA and max are outside they are practicing shooting for targets they are using an infected tied to a tree

GEORGE
so JESSICA to get good hits never shoot on full auto
just use semi or burst



JESSICA
ok

GEORGE takes a shot at the infected and hits it right in the balls blood shoots out the zombie spits blood and shakes very violently

max
nice shot man

GEORGE
you know im a way better shot than you

the next day
inside they are getting all the supplies ready to load in the car

kevin
are you guys ready to go

JESSICA
yeah we are

they grab some guns and start shooting zombies while kevin loads the car


they are sitting inside the car now they are going past farms

GEORGE
on our way to the house can we stop in town i want to pick up some stuff

JESSICA
can we please

kevin

ok but i dont want anyone going anywhere alone


the car pulls into the town the sun is setting they pull up in front of a conveinence store the streets are empty they get out witth their weapons drawn they walk up to the door break open a lock and walk in they cover their noses because there is rotten food and the clerk is lying dead on the ground they walk around GEORGE grabs a bunch of popand chips and they leave the store once outside they hear growls and footsteps of the infected runing down the street they jump in the car and drive off


max
man there were a lot of them back there

kevin
were almost here

when they turn down the street they see many zombies they roll down the windows and begin to shoot the zombies many of the zombies run towards them some of them get shot

JESSICA
i dont think we can get all of them

kevin
ok new plan lets run these ****ers down

kevin floors the car and they get faster then they hit two zombies one of them goes flying away the other rolls on the hood
and gets up and spits blood on the windsheild kevin brakes hard and the zombie goes flying off the hood and slams into two other zombies


max
look that zombie looks like a stripper but she only has one leg



they pull into the drive way and get out and shoot the zombies that are left.

GEORGE
come on lets go we gotta unload the stuff before the next wave of infected get here

they grab stuff and run to the door kevin pulls out a key and uses it on the lock they walk inside and set the stuff down

kevin
**** i forgot to lock the car

he walks out side he goes up to the car and presses the lock button nothing happens he tries it again still nothing then he spins around and sees 5 or 6 zombies coming after him

kevin
hey guys a little help

GEORGE and max run out with thier weapons they shoot the zombies but the one that is left jumps on kevin and spits blood in his eyes

kevin
GEORGE i love you

GEORGE
dad whats wrong

kevin
im infected

GEORGE
no


kevin starts shaking and screaming he begins to spit blood he gets up and starts banging on the car he smGEORGEes his head on the hood spits blood all over the winsheild he claws at the skin on his arms causing them to bleed he spits blood all over the ground

max
we have to kill him

GEORGE
cant we just tie him up

max
im not going to be the one to do it

GEORGE
my dad is ****ing infected

` max
we have to kill him or he is going to kill us


GEORGE
****ing ****

max
if you wont do it I will I don’t want to end up like that

GEORGE
no

max
he doesn’t even want to be one of those ****ing things

GEORGE
if you kill him I will ****ing kill you

max
calm down im just going to shoot him in the head he wont feel a thing

GEORGE
but he`s my dad


max
that thing is not your dad anymore

kevin continues to thrGEORGE on the ground

GEORGE walks over to kevin and smGEORGEes the back of his head with the butt of his gun kevin falls down

GEORGE
someone get me some rope


JESSICA runs out with some rope

they are inside now kevin is tied up on the ground
GEORGE is sitting at the table with glazed eyes JESSICA walks over


JESSICA
GEORGE you okay

GEORGE
what do you think my dad just turned into a ****ing infected

she gives GEORGE a hug

JESSICA
its okay we will find out how to cure this

GEORGE
yeah ok im ****in hungry

JESSICA
ill make you something

JESSICA gets up and goes through the boxes they brought



JESSICA
i dont think that there is nearly enough food here to last us


GEORGE
what can we do we cant go back in town alone


max
and im tired of eating canned crap


JESSICA
why dont we make a garden

max
how are we spossed to go outside

GEORGE
why dont we put up a fence we only need to put it up on 3 sides because were on a lake

kevin thrGEORGEes on the ground a few times then goes still

JESSICA
where are we suposed to get a fence

GEORGE
in town

JESSICA
but we cant just walk in there

max
i play a lot of driving games

cut to a shot inside of the car with max sitting in the drivers seat

max
drivings a lot harder in real life

JESSICA
well what did you think

GEORGE
i dont relly feel safe

GEORGE takes a sniper rifle rols down the windows aims and fires at a zombie running beside the car blowing its arm off much blood sprays from the wound

JESSICA
look theres a hardware store

they pull in the parking lot a zombie sees them and runs at them JESSICA takes out a magmum revolver and shoots it in the head causing blood to spray out of the back of the head onto the side of a white van

GEORGE
nice shot

15 minutes later they walk out of the store carrying a chainlink fence

its the evening they pull into the driveway of their house and unload the equipment

JESSICA
while we were there i thought i would pickup some seeds to plant because you guys are always bitching about no fresh food

max
we gotta do something about your dad

GEORGE
why dont we just take him outside


max
okay but im not touching him i dont want to get bit and turn into one of those ****ers

GEORGE
ill just knock him out and carry him out

GEORGE takes a baseball bat and walks up to kevin and hits him on the back of the head he lies down and some blood comes out of his mouth

GEORGE drags him out back and leaves him there

GEORGE
there problem solved


max
lets go to bed


outside at night kevin is on the ground tied up he begins to move he shakes violently blood sprays out of his mouth he growls cut to a shot of two zombies reacting to the growl then they begin to run towards the sound

GEORGE is sleeping in his room its light outside he slowly wakes up get out of bed puts on some pants and a shirt and goes down stairs down there he sees JESSICA and max sitting in the kitchen

JESSICA
you slept late

GEORGE
why what time is it

max
12:30

GEORGE
im going to check on my dad

GEORGE walks to the window GEORGE POV the ground is empty kevin is not there

GEORGE
hey my dads not here

max
well where the hell could he be you tied him up really tight right

GEORGE
i think so

max
how could he get out alone he must of somehow got another one to help

JESSICA
i dont think there that smart

max
why dont you go out and see if he just rolled someware

JESSICA
anyways we have to go out to put up that fence

they open up the door and bring out the fence suplies they begin by putting up the posts then put on the fence part

GEORGE
finally we can spend sometime outside

JESSICA
why dont we go swimming

max
but the infected could mabey swim

GEORGE
they cant swim there friggin retarded

cut to them swimming in the water they are near the dock throwing a ball around

JESSICA
the water feels great


they are lying on the lawn chairs with pops beside them they are tanning

kevin and 5 other zombies are running down a street kevin looks a a gun on the side walk he stops then growls and the other zombies stop and walk behind him kevin bends over and picks up the gun he holds it by the barrel and looks at it he swings it through the air and hits the ground he picks it up and looks down the barrel his other hand moves towards the trigger he looks away from the barrel and pulls the trigger and jumps back at the sound of the shot he continues to play with it finally holding it like you are supposed to the makes another growl and runs again the other zombies follow

[DjfunkmasterG]

Hi George,

its good you are going to perfect the script, just keep this in mind. You don't want to post your script online without the copyright filed first. Even though it is a message board, no one knows your real name and they can take your idea and you have no recourse if they do.

[Danny]

^ yeah dj beat me to it, copying your work in its entirety onto the net means its pretty easy pickings to be copied, you gotta treat this stuff like your a paranoid sum'bitch and act like its made of the rarest glass.

[georgefox]

Hi George,

its good you are going to perfect the script, just keep this in mind. You don't want to post your script online without the copyright filed first. Even though it is a message board, no one knows your real name and they can take your idea and you have no recourse if they do.


cant i just mail it to myself or do i need to send it to one of the copyright companies because you have to pay each time you change it so i dont relly want to

[SymphonicX]

Your 13 years old? keep up the good work....!!! Don't lose enthusiasm whatever you do!!

Well done!!!!

[DjfunkmasterG]

cant i just mail it to myself or do i need to send it to one of the copyright companies because you have to pay each time you change it so i dont relly want to

The object is to finish the script period. to the point it needs no further re-writes. Copyright that version of the screenplay, then when you film the movie, if changes are made no biggie... you just modify your current certificate from Screenplay to Motion Picture.

Just don't post it on the net anymore. Keep it to yourself.

[DrSiN]

Warning, I'm not a lawyer:

From my understanding, posting it here is just as good as mailing it to yourself. Copyright is just that, a right. Having an official registered copyright is useful and important if you plan on distributing your work as it servers as official notice that this is your work. But if someone took your script and shot it scene for scene you could sue using this as proof. Would it be as simple or clear cut no but it's still protected.

However, none of the ideas in your work are copyright able. So someone can take the basic overall plot, setting, etc and use it, without a problem as long as they don't use your character names and dialogue. So it's better to not post it for everyone to see.

Again, Warning, I'm not a lawyer!

[georgefox]

heres the script with the ending but not yet complete












EXT. BACKYARD -- DAY

the movie opens in a familys back yard there is a boy named GEORGE a little girl and a mom and a dad named KEVIN. they are barbqueing steaks

SHOT the camera follows GEORGE as he walks into the garage and goes to get something
CUT to a shot of a zombie running into thier backyard
CUT back inside the garage GEORGE is grabing a tool

MOTHER
ahhh ahh
the camer turns to a medium close up of GEORGE looling through a hole in the door he sees the zombie biting the mothers neck spewing blood out of his mouth and there is blood squirting out of the wound she falls down cut to a shot following behind a zombie the zombie runs bites the girl on the neck more blood squirts out the girl falls down dead then cut to a shot of KEVIN grabing a steak knife from the barbque and stabing the zombie through the eye then GEORGE comes out of the garage and then cut to a medium long shot of the mother and the girl getting up the dad walks over to them then they both start attacking him he is telling them "let me ****ing go' but they dont stop close up shots following the action off them scrambling around on the floor them spewing blood. GEORGE takes a crowbar and smashes their skulls with lots of blood.. KEVIN gets up and is kinda shaking cut to a shot tilting from feet to head at a medium speed he is covered in blood and brain matter. they go inside and lock the door cut to a shot of KEVIN calling 911 the message on the line says that they are currently busy he waits on they phone for 30 seconds. he slams the phone down and starts screaming "what the **** is ****ing going on"
he starts to cry. outside they hear screams and sirens and gunshots.

MONTAGE: infected attacks

EXT. PARK -- NIGHT

a woman is running from two infected. the infected spit blood all over her back

WOMAN
stop ****ing chasing me

SHOT: handheld shot following behind the woman an infected jumps out in front of her and spits blood on her face

she falls down and shakes violently on the ground and starts to cough up blood and then gets up and becomes infected

EXT. STREET -- NIGHT

a few zombies run down the street one of them gets shot in the heart and fall down

SHOT: CUS of infected on ground it coughs up some blood then dies

EXT. SOMEONES BACKYARD -- NIGHT

a zombie bites someones neck and lots of blood sprays out the person then falls to the ground a few seconds later he jumps up and growls then runs off

EXT STREET -- NIGHT

an infected jumps off the roof of a car and lands on a man then the man tries to fight him off and punches the zombie in the face the zombie spits blood on his face and the man shakes on the ground then spits blood then pushes the infected off and

SHOT the camera is in a car looking out the window inside is a family then an infectec bangs on the side window then spits blood on it

SHOT CUS of an infected chewing on flesh

SHOT: an infected eating intestines

SHOT 2 infected spitting blood on 3 kids

SHOT: CUS of an infected`s face on the left side of his face there is a large hole that you can see its teeth through

SHOT: 3 infected running at the camera they get shot in the chest and fall to the ground




INT. FAMILY ROOM -- DAY

GEORGE
**** this i cant stand watching the god damn tv anymore im going out side
to see for my self whats going on


KEVIN
you cant go out there

GEORGE
im going to the backyard ill be back

GEORGE gets up and leaves the room

continuos hand held shot following GEORGE walking out side
GEORGE hears a noise turns around and sees a zombie running at him the zombie pushes him to the ground they roll around the zombie is spitting blood
they continue to roll around

GEORGE
help someone help this ****in things going to kill me
then just as the zombie is about to bite his neck the zombie gets shot in the heart covering GEORGE in blood

max
did you get any blood in your eyes or mouth

GEORGE
no **** no wait why do you care

max
its a virus its transmitted by blood

GEORGE
but if its a virus then why after you die you get back up

max
because if you get bit and you die but the virus starts a chemical reaction in your body that causes your heart to start beating again and makes you go ****in insane


GEORGE
how the **** do you know all this ****

max
my dad he was a biological weapon engineer he told me about this virus the iranians were designing that is suposed to infect a mass populace very quickly and cause the infected to go and infect more people

GEORGE
then why the **** is it here in toronto

max
i dont know and because i know your going to ask there is no ****ing cure no vaccine nothing

GEORGE
so your pretty much saying that we are totally ****ed

max
yep we are so ****ing screwed


GEORGE
im sorry i forgot to say thanks for saving my ****in life

max
no problem

GEORGE
so wheres your family

max
there dead their all ****in dead

GEORGE
do ya wanta stay with us

max
fine

they start to walk inside shot of the camera zooming out from the body showing a hole in the zombies chest and the ground covered in blood

cut to a shot of GEORGE and max walking inside

GEORGE
dad this is max he is stayin with us

max
hey thanks for lettin g me stay here

GEORGE
max knows why these ****in things are here


cut to a shot of them sitting at the kitchen table

GEORGE
its been two ****ing days and still no help we have got to do some thing

KEVIN
i agree what do we need to do

GEORGE
we have to first fill up any containers we have with water because we dont know when the water supply will run out

max
ok ill do that


GEORGE
we`ve got to round up all the weapons and ammo\


cut to the next day looking up at them looking at a table

GEORGE
ok as far as guns we`ve got 3 m4s 2 shotguns 4 berretas 2 m1911s
2 walther p99s

KEVIN
ok we each get an m4 me and GEORGE get a shot gun we each get a berreta
GEORGE and max get a m1911 and me and GEORGE get a walther

max
we dont have nearly enough food

KEVIN
in 3 days lets go to the grocery stor in the car get a bunch of food

GEORGE max
ok


cut to 2 days later max and GEORGE are watching a movie and then the power gets shut off

GEORGE
what the hell was that

max
i dont ****in know

KEVIN walks in the room with a flashlight


KEVIN
are you guys ok

GEORGE
yeah were fine

KEVIN
i think we just blew a fuse ill go down and reset the breakers

shot following KEVIN as he decends down the stairs he walks into the room with the fuses there is no sound whatsoever exept for his foot steps and breathing he moves the flashlight around the room sees nothing and opens the box with the fuses he hears something he turns around and a zombie jumps down from a peice of funature and pulls him down the zombie spits blood he starts smashing the zombies head with the back of it until he cracks the skull and screws up the brain he resets the circuts and the lights comeback on

GEORGE
what the hell happened to you


KEVIN
max can you hand me a towel

max
sure

the next night

they are in the kitchen getting on gear and loadin weapons

KEVIN
all ready to go

max
**** yeah lets kick some zombie ass

GEORGE
lets get the hell outa here

they go outside there are no zombies on the street they walk to the car open up the doors and get in

cut to a shot of them pulling in to the parking lot they get out and 15 zombies start running after them they start shooting them then run into the store one of them pulls out a shotgun and blows a zombie head off

GEORGE
man i blew the mother ****ers head off

they run into the store and start loading up carts with food

they drive down the street and see the street fairly clear but still a few zombies they open up the windows and begin fireing on the zombies they get out and open the trunk and carry the stuff in while max covers them

max
` come on hurry up the the infected are getting too ****in
close


they head inside and begin to lay the food out on the table they begin to disscus where they should go from here

KEVIN
i dont think we can stay here much longer

max
why cant we?

GEORGE
hey look theres a girl out there

max
we see infected chicks all the time

GEORGE
shes not infected

max turns his head to the window

max
KEVIN there really is a chick there

GEORGE grabs a gun off the table and opens up the door and runs down the street

JESSICA
ahhh can someone ****in help me

GEORGE runs towards the girl while blasting the zombie with his shot gun as he gets closer a zombie runs towards the girl when it is 2 feet away GEORGE shoots the zombie in the chest covering JESSICA with blood
he grabs her hand and pulls her up the street towards the house he gets her inside

[georgefox]

2 days later

GEORGE and JESSICA and max are outside they are practicing shooting for targets they are using an infected tied to a tree

GEORGE
so JESSICA to get good hits never shoot on full auto
just use semi or burst



JESSICA
ok

GEORGE takes a shot at the infected and hits it right in the balls blood shoots out the zombie spits blood and shakes very violently

max
nice shot man

GEORGE
you know im a way better shot than you

the next day
inside they are getting all the supplies ready to load in the car

KEVIN
are you guys ready to go

JESSICA
yeah we are

they grab some guns and start shooting zombies while KEVIN loads the car

EXT. ROAD BLOCK -- DAY

we see a large road block

INT. CAR -- DAY

CUS of kevin looking at the road block

kevin
i guess we arent getting through

kevin(continued)
we might as well go back

INT. CAR -- DAY (LATER)
GEORGE
on our way to the house can we stop in town i want to pick up some stuff

JESSICA
can we please

KEVIN

ok but i dont want anyone going anywhere alone


the car pulls into the town the sun is setting they pull up in front of a conveinence store the streets are empty they get out witth their weapons drawn they walk up to the door break open a lock and walk in they cover their noses because there is rotten food and the clerk is lying dead on the ground they walk around GEORGE grabs a bunch of popand chips and they leave the store once outside they hear growls and footsteps of the infected runing down the street they jump in the car and drive off


max
man there were a lot of them back there

KEVIN
were almost here

when they turn down the street they see many zombies they roll down the windows and begin to shoot the zombies many of the zombies run towards them some of them get shot

JESSICA
i dont think we can get all of them

KEVIN
ok new plan lets run these ****ers down

KEVIN floors the car and they get faster then they hit two zombies one of them goes flying away the other rolls on the hood
and gets up and spits blood on the windsheild KEVIN brakes hard and the zombie goes flying off the hood and slams into two other zombies


max
look that zombie looks like a stripper but she only has one leg

KEVIN
ive seen some crazy **** before but i have never seen me a one legged stripper


they pull into the drive way and get out and shoot the zombies that are left.

GEORGE
come on lets go we gotta unload the stuff before the next wave of infected get here

they grab stuff and run to the door KEVIN pulls out a key and uses it on the lock they walk inside and set the stuff down

KEVIN
**** i forgot to lock the car

he walks out side he goes up to the car and presses the lock button nothing happens he tries it again still nothing then he spins around and sees 5 or 6 zombies coming after him

KEVIN
hey guys a little help

GEORGE and max run out with thier weapons they shoot the zombies but the one that is left jumps on KEVIN and spits blood in his eyes

KEVIN
GEORGE i love you

GEORGE
dad whats wrong

KEVIN
im infected

GEORGE
no


KEVIN starts shaking and screaming he begins to spit blood he gets up and starts banging on the car he smashes his head on the hood spits blood all over the winsheild he claws at the skin on his arms causing them to bleed he spits blood all over the ground

max
we have to kill him

GEORGE
cant we just tie him up

max
im not going to be the one to do it

` GEORGE
fine ill do it

max
i dont mean that i mean that no one should

GEORGE
we cant kill him

max
he is just going to kill us if we let him live

GEORGE
noooo

GEORGE
but he`s my dad


max
that things not you dad anymore

KEVIN continues to thrash on the ground

GEORGE walks over to KEVIN and smashes the back of his head with the butt of his gun KEVIN falls down

GEORGE
someone get me some rope


JESSICA runs out with some rope

they are inside now KEVIN is tied up on the ground
GEORGE is sitting at the table with glazed eyes JESSICA walks over


JESSICA
GEORGE you okay

GEORGE
what do you think my dad just turned into a ****ing infected

she gives GEORGE a hug

JESSICA
its okay we will find out how to cure this

GEORGE
yeah ok im ****in hungry

JESSICA
ill make you something

JESSICA gets up and goes through the boxes they brought



JESSICA
i dont think that there is nearly enough food here to last us


GEORGE
what can we do we cant go back in town alone


max
and im tired of eating canned crap


JESSICA
why dont we make a garden

max
how are we spossed to go outside

GEORGE
why dont we put up a fence we only need to put it up on 3 sides because were on a lake

KEVIN thrashes on the ground a few times then goes still

JESSICA
where are we suposed to get a fence

GEORGE
in town

JESSICA
but we cant just walk in there

max
i play a lot of driving games

cut to a shot inside of the car with max sitting in the drivers seat

max
drivings a lot harder in real life

JESSICA
well what did you think

GEORGE
i dont relly feel safe

GEORGE takes a sniper rifle rols down the windows aims and fires at a zombie running beside the car blowing its arm off much blood sprays from the wound

JESSICA
look theres a hardware store

they pull in the parking lot a zombie sees them and runs at them JESSICA takes out a magmum revolver and shoots it in the head causing blood to spray out of the back of the head onto the side of a white van

GEORGE
nice shot

15 minutes later they walk out of the store carrying a chainlink fence

its the evening they pull into the driveway of their house and unload the equipment

JESSICA
while we were there i thought i would pickup some seeds to plant because you guys are always bitching about no fresh food

max
we gotta do something about your dad

GEORGE
why dont we just take him outside


max
okay but im not touching him i dont want to get bit and turn into one of those ****ers

GEORGE
ill just knock him out and carry him out

GEORGE takes a baseball bat and walks up to KEVIN and hits him on the back of the head he lies down and some blood comes out of his mouth

GEORGE drags him out back and leaves him there

GEORGE
there problem solved


max
lets go to bed


outside at night KEVIN is on the ground tied up he begins to move he shakes violently blood sprays out of his mouth he growls cut to a shot of two zombies reacting to the growl then they begin to run towards the sound

GEORGE is sleeping in his room its light outside he slowly wakes up get out of bed puts on some pants and a shirt and goes down stairs down there he sees JESSICA and max sitting in the kitchen

JESSICA
you slept late

GEORGE
why what time is it

max
12:30

GEORGE
im going to check on my dad

GEORGE walks to the window GEORGE POV the ground is empty KEVIN is not there

GEORGE
hey my dads not here

max
well where the hell could he be you tied him up really tight right

GEORGE
i think so

max
how could he get out alone he must of somehow got another one to help

JESSICA
i dont think there that smart

max
why dont you go out and see if he just rolled someware

JESSICA
anyways we have to go out to put up that fence

they open up the door and bring out the fence suplies they begin by putting up the posts then put on the fence part

GEORGE
finally we can spend sometime outside

JESSICA
why dont we go swimming

max
but the infected could mabey swim

GEORGE
they cant swim there friggin retardef

[georgefox]

cut to them swimming in the water they are near the dock throwing a ball around

JESSICA
the water feels great


they are lying on the lawn chairs with pops beside them they are tanning

KEVIN and 5 other zombies are running down a street KEVIN looks a a gun on the side walk he stops then growls and the other zombies stop and walk behind him KEVIN bends over and picks up the gun he holds it by the barrel and looks at it he swings it through the air and hits the ground he picks it up and looks down the barrel his other hand moves towards the trigger he looks away from the barrel and pulls the trigger and jumps back at the sound of the shot he continues to play with it finally holding it like you are supposed to the makes another growl and runs again the other zombies follow

it is the late after noon and they are inside now

max
thats the most fun ive had in a long time

JESSICA
outside look theres a zombie running but its carrying a bat

they look outside the zombie is swinging the bat

GEORGE
they are getting smarter

cut to KEVIN and the group of zombies they are in a garage and they are eating bodies one of them is chewing on a girls face then pans KEVIN and another one are eating intestines from a body with an open chest


cut to a timelapse shot of the sky changing from night to day then night then day then night then day

its late morning now they are in the kitchen eating breakfest

GEORGE
what do you want to do today

JESSICA
do you want to raid the other houses for food and books mabey some movies

max
i guess so but i dont want to get close to the living dead

GEORGE
well we will take some guns

they walk outside they are wearing gas masks and tactical vests

they walk across the street. an infected comes running dow the street max takes his gun and shoots the zombie in the head they continue on to a house they open the door they slowly walk through the rooms they get to the kitchen there is a dead man on the floor blood on him he has a gunshot to the head

GEORGE
ok we need canned food

max opens up cupboards looking for food he pulls out a few cans and puts them in a bag JESSICA leaves the room the camera follows her she walks into the living room she picks up a pile of dvds in the pile are :pulp fiction , dawn of the dead,planet terror,28 days later,shawshank redemption
on the floor is a box of red apple cigertes and a fast food bag with big kahuna burger on it

JESSICA
i got some dvds here

GEORGE
just put them in a bag and take them with you

she puts them in a bag and leves the room on the way out she finds a hand on the floor she kicks it away

they leave the house and go back home


kevin and the group of zombies are running down a street a woman is running from them kevin raises the gun and pulls the trigger the bullets hit her in the back she falls the zombies jump on her one of them reaches into the bullet hole in her back and starts pulling out her spine


13 days later

they are sitting inside GEORGE is reading max is playing on a gameboy JESSICA is lying on a couch

max
we need food

JESSICA
its now been 4 days without food

GEORGE
we cant find anymore food in the neigborhood

JESSICA
why dont we just take the car and drive it to a store

max
we cant there is too many of them

GEORGE
why dont we try at the houses at the end of the street

then a sound of a window breaking is heared they run to the front of the house on the ground a zombie is just getting up
GEORGE tackles the zombie it tries to bite his arm GEORGE and the zombie roll outside GEORGE punches it in the face blood comes out of its mouth it flails its arms smacking him in the face GEORGE punches him 3 times

GEORGE
you motha****er

the zombie pushes GEORGEs arms away and gets very close to his neck they roll over so GEORGE is ontop GEORGE repeatedly knees the zombie in the face

GEORGE
****ing peice of ****

blood pours out of the mouth and nose teeth are seen on the ground GEORGE takes a kinfe and stabs him many times in the chest the zombie dies

GEORGE gets up

they are back inside

JESSICA
tomorrow lets go down the street and get something to eat

its morning they are in the kitchen loading up guns they all put on gas masks and walk out the door a zombie runs out from the left GEORGE raises his gun and shoots the zombie in the heart the zombie falls

they walk down the street 3 zombies come up from behind they run the zombies get closer max turns around shoots two in the heart JESSICA takes a knife and throws it at the last zombie it slices open the neck blood gushes out it falls down

JESSICA
take that mother ****er

they stop in the middle of the street zombies start to close in from all sides they start shooting them the zombies fall GEORGE takes a shotgun off his back turns to his right and fires three zombies go down blood sprays all over GEORGE he pumps the shot gun one handed and takes out another two max is fireing on a group of zombies his gun runs out of ammo

max
im out need to reload

GEORGE
got it

GEORGE spins around max is in the way of his shot

GEORGE
****ing duck

max ducks GEORGE shoots three zombies fall JESSICA is using an uzi and many zombies are falling GEORGE takes out a knife and cuts a bunch of zombies necks finally all the zombies are dead

max
i hope thats all of the ****ers

they continue to run down the street

they reach the house at the end of the street max looks in the windows
POV shot max the house is emptythere are some papers and stuff on the floor

max
looks like no one is home

GEORGE
door is locked

GEORGE aims his shotgun at the lock and fires the door swings open

GEORGE
is anyone home

they walk inside and go around and collect food


cut to back inside their house they are in the living room

max
GEORGE can you go get me some socks from my room

GEORGE
sure

GEORGE walks up the stairs he enters the room he looks through the drawers he sees in one of them a metal box he opens it inside are 8 vials of green liquid a syringe and a peice of paper the paper says that it is a cure for the infection it says its for max`s dad

GEORGE walks down stairs

max
hey where are my socks

GEORGE
max come outside

max
why

GEORGE
come the **** out side

max goes outside

GEORGE
why the **** didnt you tell us you had a cure

max
what are you talking about

GEORGE walks over to max punches him in the face his nose starts bleeding

GEORGE
i found the metal box in your room it said it was for your dad it could have saved my dad

max
im sorry

GEORGE
sorry is not ****ing good enough

GEORGE pulls out a gun max takes out his max is on the ground they are pointing the guns at each other it looks like resovoir dogs

max
please dont kill me

GEORGE

you ****er

max pulls the trigger shooting GEORGE in the side as GEORGE is falling down he shoots max in the chest JESSICA comes out with a gun just as max tries to shoot GEORGE in the head JESSICA shoots max in the head JESSICA runs down to GEORGE his white shirt is covered in blood he is bleeding hevily

GEORGE
how bad am i shot

JESSICA
not so bad it looks like it didnt go too deep

GEORGE rips off the shirt the wound is small but there is lots of blood

GEORGE
put some ****ing pressure on it

JESSICA

it wont stop

GEORGE
im passing out

the screen goes black

then GEORGEs room slowly comes into focus GEORGE is in bed his eyes open he looks around

GEORGE
aww my head hurts

JESSICA comes into the room

JESSICA
your awake

GEORGE
what happend

JESSICA
you got shot

GEORGE
by who

JESSICA
max

GEORGE
why did he shoot me where the **** is he

JESSICA
he`s dead

GEORGE
how

JESSICA
dont you remember you shot him because he had a cure for the infection

GEORGE
i couldent of shot him

JESSICA
you did

GEORGE
your lieing your ****ing liying

GEORGE puts his head over the side of the bed and vomits everywhere the screen goes black

the camera slowly focuses into veiw it is morning GEORGE gets out of bed

GEORGE
JESSICA are you here

he gets up and leaves the room walks downstairs the house looks empty

GEORGE
JESSICA JESSICA


he looks in each room there is no one he looks outside and JESSICA is lying on the dock he walks out

GEORGE
hey JESSICA

JESSICA
your up its been almost
5 weeks

GEORGE
what have you been doing

JESSICA
mostly relaxing

GEORGE
i guess its just us now since max is dead

JESSICA
im so sorry he is dead i cant belive i shot him

GEORGE
its ok he would have killed us anyways he hid the cure and was planning god knows what

JESSICA
i still dont think its right

GEORGE
come on get up we`re geting some exerscise

[georgefox]

he walks back up stairs and puts on some clothes he is wearing all black with a tactical vest and a hand gun on each thigh and two in shoulder holstlers an mp5 across his chest a shot gun on his back and an M4 in a sling

GEORGE
ready

JESSICA walks out she is wearing black pants and a black t-shirt she has two berretas in thigh holstlers
on her tactical vest there are grenades she has an M4 and a shotgun

JESSICA
ready but what are we going to do

GEORGE
just shoot zombies see who can score the most kills

they walk out back and open up the gate

JESSICA
come on you mother ****ers

a zombie runs through the gate GEORGE raises his M4 and shoots it in the heart

GEORGE
one

another zombie runs at them JESSICA shoots it in the leg then in the chest

JESSICA
1 for me

3 zombies run towards them GEORGE and JESSICA take out two hand guns each and shoot them in the neck and chest

JESSICA
2

GEORGE
3

a tall zombie with a apron and burlap sack over his head carrying a chainsaw walks slowly towards them he reves the chainsaw

GEORGE
i got him

GEORGE unloads ten rounds from his handgun into the zombie and it continues to walk

GEORGE
help

JESSICA
got it

JESSICA uses her shotgun firing five rounds into it then it stumbles and GEORGE shoots it in the head

GEORGE
ok we each get one so ive got 5

JESSICA
4

6 zombies run at them GEORGE uses his M4 and shoots 3 of them in the head then JESSICA shoots the rest of them

JESSICA
7

GEORGE
8 you cant beat me

2 zombies run at them both of their guns click

GEORGE
im empty

JESSICA
me too

the zombies get closer JESSICA drops her gun then walks toward them she punches one of them in the face blood spits out of its mouth then she breaks the others neck

GEORGE
nice kill

JESSICA
now im beating you

GEORGE
duck

JESSICA ducks and a zombie is behind her then it gets shot in the neck

it fades to more zombie kills

GEORGE
15,16

JESSICA
13,14,15

a zombie jumps towards JESSICA and mid air it gets shot and flies back


cut to about an hour later GEORGE and JESSICA are surounded by bodies '

GEORGE
and the final total is 46 whats yours

JESSICA
47

GEORGE
**** you beat me

JESSICA
come on lets go in

INT HOUSE KITCHEN - DAY

GEORGE and JESSICA are sitting at the table

GEORGE
do you want to go shopping

JESSICA
yeah

EXT FRONT YARD-DAY

they walk out side wearing the same gear from the day before they go up to the car


JESSICA
im driving

INT: BIG STORE LIKE A ZELLERS OR WALMART- DAY

they walk inside and each grabs a cart

JESSICA
im going to clothes

GEORGE
meet me in electronics

INT: CLOTHING ISLE- DAY

JESSICA walks down the isle and stops to look at some clothes she grabs a shirt and holds it up to herself walks over to a mirror

JESSICA
that looks nice

she throws it into the cart

INT: ELECTRONICS ISLE - DAY

GEORGE walks past the movies he throws some of them in the cart

GEORGE
that looks good

cut to a quick close up of the movie it is planet terror

he continues to throw movies in the cart

GEORGE
(yells) im going to tools


cut back to JESSICA in the clothes isle

JESSICA
ill meet you there

cut back to GEORGE walking towards the tools

GEORGE
find anything good


cut to JESSICA in the clothes isle trying on a pair of shoes

JESSICA
got some clothes but nothing usful


INT: TOOLS ISLE - DAY

cut to a WIDE SHOT of GEORGE walking down the isles he takes two drills off the shelf and puts them in the cart cut to a CLOSE UP of GEORGEs face he looks like he seen something awsome CUT to a CLOSE UP shot of a chainsaw that pulls out to a MEDIUM SHOT


GEORGE
Groovy

CUT to a MS showing GEORGE putting it in the cart

INT TOY DEPARTMENT -- DAY

UNKNOWN THINGS POV it moves through the isles then it begins to run


INT CLOTHING ISLE DAY

MWS of JESSICA looking at shoes

JESSICA
what do you think

GEORGE(O.S)
im coming


INT FOOD ISLE -- DAY

UNKNOWN THINGS POV it runs until it gets near to the CLOTHING ISLE

INT CLOSE TO THE CLOTHING ISLE -- DAY

GEORGE walks down the clothes isle

GEORGE
what did you want me to see

INT CLOTHES ISLE -- DAY

UNKNOWN THINGS POV he runs towards JESSICA who does not see him then he growls she looks up and pulls out a hand gun she fires and the screen goes red and it falls to the ground FADE TO BLACK


INT CLOTHING ISLE -- DAY

GEORGE walks up to JESSICA

GEORGE
what the **** happened

JESSICA
one of the infected was in here i shot it in the head

GEORGE takes the stuff out of his cart and puts it in hers

GEORGE
were going


EXT. OUTSIDE OF HOUSE -- NIGHT

MS of GEORGEs face that pans to look at the house the lights are on and there is a few infected inside


GEORGE
we cant stay there tonight

JESSICA
why not we just have to go in there and blast them

GEORGE
because if they can communicate then they problably know that we`ll be back

JESSICA
(YELLS) well where the **** are we going to go

GEORGE
shhh they might hear us tonight we will just hide in the car

INT. HOUSE LIVING ROOM -- NIGHT

one of the infected looks out the window and growls the other infected look upand then they runn out the door

EXT. FRONT YARD -- NIGHT

the infected run out

GEORGE
run

they run to the end of the street and run down the ravine
SHOT: handheld shot of the infected running after them they run down the ravine some of them slip on the hill then get back up

it is lit by flashlights

SHOT: HANDHELD the camera is moving paraell to them GEORGE and JESSICA run through the forest
SHOT: HANDHELD the camera faces the infected and moves back the infected spit blood and it splatters on the camera
GEORGE and JESSICA keep running they turn to the right

GEORGE
come on hurry up

GEORGE trips he pulls out his gun and shoots the zombies in the neck and chest all but one go down the last on jumps on him\

SHOT: the infected is on top of the camera GEORGE puts his gun under the chin and fires a ton of blood sprays up and cvers them

GEORGE
the others would have heard this
go go go

EXT. FOREST -- NIGHT

the sun is just starting to come up

GEORGE and JESSICA are in the forest they are sitting on logs eating chocolate bars from a plastic bag on the ground


JESSICA
are we going back home

GEORGE
i think we can if we close all the blinds
so they cant see in


EXT. FRONT YARD OF HOUSE -- DAY

GEORGE and JESSICA are walking up to the house they raise their weapons and open the door


INT. FRONT HALL -- DAY

GEORGE and JESSICA walk in and clear the hall


GEORGE
clear

they walk down stairs
INT. DOWNSTAIRS ROOM 1 --DAY

the room is dark the only light is their flashlights

SHOT: MWS of an infected in the room the beam of the flash light quickly moves to illuminate the face the infected growls then is quickly shot in the head

EXT. BACKYARD -- DAY (LATER)

GEORGE is BBQing steaks JESSICA is on the deck reading a book

GEORGE
steak`s almost ready

SHOT: MS on JESSICA


JESSICA
i kind of enjoy this just being able to relax having the whole city
to ourselfes other than the infected of course

GEORGE walks over to a raido sitting on the table and turns it on

GEORGE
can anyone hear me

(STATIC)

GEORGE
i guess everyone is gone

JESSICA
come on forget about it relax

GEORGE walks back over to the bbq and opens the lid

[georgefox]

GEORGE
steaks done

GEORGE takes the steaks off the barbeque and brings them over to the table

EXT BACKYARD -- DAY (10 MINUTES LATER)

SHOT: MS on JESSICA she is eating steak

JESSICA
this steak is good

GEORGE
im pretty pretty pretty good (refer to curb your enthusiasm) at cooking

JESSICA
ill make you dinner tonight



INT. BASEMENT -- DAY

GEORGE is working at a table there is a gun mounted to an arm and a camera

JESSICA walks in


JESSICA
what are you doing

GEORGE
(looks up)
security,im putting a gun on a radio controled armwith a camera
so i can protect the door

JESSICA
can i see


GEORGE flicks a switch on the gun he takes the controller the gun turns from side to side and moves up and down GEORGE makes it aim at JESSICA

JESSICA
dont point that **** at me

GEORGE
its empty see (he pulls the trigger)

(GUNSHOT)

the gun goes off

GEORGE
****

JESSICA
what the ****

GEORGE
i didnt know it was loaded

JESSICA
its cool but please dont ****ing use it inside

GEORGE
sorry sorry

JESSICA
dinner`s on

INT. KITCHEN -- NIGHT

GEORGE and JESSICA are eating dinner



JESSICA
what do you want to do later

GEORGE
maby watch a movie

JESSICA
how about we play something

GEORGE
like...

JESSICA
monopoly

GEORGE
i dont like monopoly it goes on too long plus
theres only two of us


INT. BASEMENT -- DAY


george is working on making mines for home security

INSERT: the book on the tables page title

"HOW TO MAKE MINES

george puts two wires onto the mine

george
(to himself)
one down 3 to go


INT. LIVING ROOM -- DAY

jessica is watching a movie on the tv george walks in carrying the mines

george
can you come out front i want to put out the mines


jessica
sure two seconds

EXT. FRONT YARD --DAY

they walk out side and george sets out the mines

SHOT. close up of georges hand pressing a button on the mine it makes a beeping noise

george
ok all ready

jessica
lets go


they run inside the house the door closes

INT. UPSTAIRS ROOM -- DAY

george is using a sniper rifle with a scope out the window

EXT. STREET -- DAY

an infected runs down the street

INT. UPSTAIRS ROOM -- DAY

george takes aim with the gun

SHOT: CU georges finger on the trigger he pulls the trigger

EXT. STREET -- DAY

the infected gets shot in the chest it falls to the ground

SHOT: CU of infected on ground it gurggles up blood

INT. UPSTAIRS ROOM -- DAY

george aims the rifle and fires

george
yeah mutha****er

george moves the gun to the left and fires


EXT. STREET -- DAY

an infected falls to the ground after being shot it squirms then stops moving

INT. UPSTAIRS ROOM -- DAY

george fires the rifle twice

SHOT: looking through scope an infected runs the camera follows (GUNSHOT) it falls to the ground

EXT. STREET -- DAY

an infected runs towards the camera it gets shot in the head
CUT
a female infected to the side of the camera she gets shot twice in the chest
CUT
another infected gets shot in the heart

INT. UPSTAIRS ROOM -- DAY

george picks up the gun and closes the window and walks out of the room


INT. BASEMENT ROOM -- DAY (LATER)

George is sitting at a table covered with guns

he picks one up and starts cleaning it he unloads the magazine then puts the cleaning brush down the barrel it comes out blackend


jessica walks in

jessica
do you want to do something

george
maby but help me clean these

jessica pulls up a seat on the other side of the table she picks up a gun and cleans it


george
which is better pulp fiction or the godfather

jessica
maby the godfather but its also a lot slower moving than pulp

george
both are great i dont really know if i can say one over the other

jessica
in terms of acting both were incredable

george
i think pulp might actually be better but what do i know ive only seen 700-750 films

jessica
thats alot more than me

george
whats the funniest movie of all time

jessica
40 year old virgin

george
i know the 2 clerks movies are ****in hilarious like a
guy ****ing a donkey in a fast food resturant or
a chick ****ing a guy in the dark who is actually dead
i laughed so friggin hard

jessica
what about superbad

george
really funny but not the best

jessica
what about the most violent film

george
irreversable was ****ed up you know with the 9 minute long rape

jessica
how bout sin city

george
sin city rocks but its not that violent compared to irreversable

jessica
and the funnest movie

george
planet terror all the ****in way like its got everything hot girl with a machine gun leg, zombies, explosions , buckets of gore, bruce willis

jessica
i havent seen it

george
tonight were watching it


jessica walks out

george picks up an M4 and attaches the foregrip to the rails he picks it up and aims at the wall


he attaches an optical sight and points the gun at a target on the wall and then turns the knobs to tune the sight

jessica walks back in carrying a bag of chips

jessica
want some

george
sure

she hands him the chips

george loads some magazines with bullets

jessica
what do you want for dinner

george
soup

jessica
we got lots of that

jessica grabs a few pistol mags and puts rounds into them

jessica
where did you get all these guns

george
when my dad was younger he used to work for a military
contractor and he got to take some of the stuff home

jessica
dont you need licences for this stuff

george
not anymore i doubt if anyones even alive they would care enough to aresst us

jessica
i wonder if the rest of the world is infection free

george
im going on my computer to check

george goes over to his computer and goes to a website

INSERT: the webpage

`AN INFECTION CRIPLES NORTH AMERICA

goverment officals say that north america is under quarentine


george
looks like the infection has`nt spread

jessica
is help coming

george
were quarinted no one gets in or out

jessica
cant we call for help we do have a cure they might evacuate us

george
no one knows were here i could post something on the
net asking for help but i dobut that anyone would belive us

jessica
does it say when the quaentine will be lifted

george
no

INT. LIVNG ROOM -- NIGHT

jessica is lying on one couch reading and george is on the other flying a mini remote control helicopter

SHOT: the helicopter flying in the air it moves towards jessica

jessica
keep it away

george
its not going to touch you

jessica
just keep it away

george
you know i never asked you if you like killing infected

jessica
well kinda you know its fun to kill a person without killing one

george
its like a video game but for real

jessica
yeah but a lot scarier and the fact that you can die

george
i have to ask myself why did we survive

jessica
maby we just got lucky

george
there has to be other survivors if we could just contact them

jessica
we can survive on our own at least till help arrives if we find others
we`ll probably end up killing each other its a miracle one of us hasnt gone mad

george
im going to bed


INT. BASEMENT ROOM -- DAY

GEORGE and jessica are aiming hand guns at makeshift targets

george fires all the rounds in his clip

jessica
nice all but one on the head

george
can you do better

jessica emptys her clip

george
you got all on the head

jessica
seeing that ive never shot a gun before the infection
its pretty good

george
its ****in good

george puts in a new mag he fires 3 shots into the heart area

jessica
3 to the heart

george
you know we should watch the movie sleepaway camp

jessica
it sound low budget

george
it has the most disturbing ending

INT. KITCHEN -- DAY

jessica is at the counter eating breakfast

george walks in

george
you make some for me

jessica
yeah

george sits down

george
what do you want to do

jessica
watch a movie or two

george
im going to figure out the generator in case we lose power

jessica
i might have a nap

EXT. GARAGE -- DAY

george is on the ground with the genorator in front of him a manual is beside him

george picks up the manual and then flips a switch on the generator it springs to life he plugs in a light and it turns on

george
YES

he turns it off and carries it inside

INT. KITCHEN --DAY

it is lunch george and jessica are at the table eating

jessica
i want to go down to the ravine for a while today

george
dont you remember there are infected

jessica
come on

george
ok but were down there for 20 minutes tops

EXT . RAVINE -- DAY

george and jessica walk down the ravine

george
why did you want to come here

jessica
i want to get out ive been in the house for 10 days in a row

a branch falls and hits both of them knocking them out

[georgefox]

EXT BACKYARD -- NIGHT

• george and jessica run out of the house followed by 10-15 infected
they run into the garage they turn on the lights but it just flashes like a strobe light

george
theres too many of them

the infected get closer

SHOT: the camera moves infront of all the infected

george
give me the infected blood

jessica
why

george
after your infected you still can control what you do for a few minutes right
so im going to infect myself so i become stronger then ill kill them while i still have control

jessica
but then your infected

george
once their dead inject me with the cure

george grabs the blood and a syringe then injects it in to his arm

george
if the cure doesnt work kill me

george starts shaking then coughs up blood


george
****kk

george starts banging on walls then on the window and spits blood on the glass he claws at his skin

hes on the ground on his side shaking spitting blood

he gets up and spits blood on the ground

he growls

SHOT ECUS his eyes slowly turn red

george runs at the infected he grabs one and bites its neck it falls to the ground

he turs to one beside him and repeatedly punches him in the face

the others start running at him he pulls two to the ground and slams their heads on the concrete

he pulls another to the ground and pushes his thumbs into the eyes
an infected runs up behind him he elbows it in the face
he bites ones wrist and lots of blood sprays out

he bites one in the neck

he slams ones head against the wall until there is a big circle of blood on the wall

finally all the infected are dead

jessica takes out the syringe and jams it in georges neck

george falls down

FADE TO BLACK

INT. BED ROOM -- DAY

george opens his eyes

george
did it work

jessica walks in

jessica
yeah youve been out for like a week

george
did you hear anything on the radio

jessica
nothing

george
do you think theres anyone else

jessica
i dont know


GEORGE (V.O)

its been 3 years since that happened i havent seen another infection free person
jessica is still alive we have survived living off canned food i cant stand it anymore.


(GUNSHOT)


FADE TO BLACK



THE END




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[lifelikecarcass]

Don't show this to your mom.
She'll have you in therapy and think you hate her and your sister.
The mom and sister die immediately.