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  1. 13-Jul-2007 #16
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    Quote Originally Posted by benjamin03 View Post
    The midas touch yes that was it !

    I read it about 6 times and it made me go look up what the whole 'midas touch' mythology was. :P That good was the story.
    It should have been longer... But with my spare time so scarce after nearly a year it still wasn't finished - so basically I just threw stuff into the missing areas to finish it up. Hence, some sections are very rushed.

    It started almost as a script and flipped over to a regular story - I think some of the areas still show this as it almost reads like a script in setting the scene.


    There's a sequel in my head (with some of Giles' group not appreciating Jason's actions ), but it's likely to stay there given me having even less free time now
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  2. 13-Jul-2007 #17
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    Perhaps those 'rushed' parts are what made the story even better then other good zombie stories, and the open ending was IMHO awesome, and it doesn't need a sequel, not that i wouldn't like to read another zombie story from you but with Midas Touch being so good and the baeutiful open ending which makes u wonder it would 'hurt' the vast greatness of this story ! Ofcourse this is just my opinion.
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    Quote Originally Posted by benjamin03 View Post
    Perhaps those 'rushed' parts are what made the story even better then other good zombie stories, and the open ending was IMHO awesome, and it doesn't need a sequel, not that i wouldn't like to read another zombie story from you but with Midas Touch being so good and the baeutiful open ending which makes u wonder it would 'hurt' the vast greatness of this story ! Ofcourse this is just my opinion.
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    Two other really good ones recently read:

    "A Hunting We Will Go"
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    "Taking Care of Elaine"
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    Tank is one of my favorites.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Eyebiter View Post
    Tank is one of my favorites.

    Ditto, I loved that one.
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